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My Favorite Place -faithwalker

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My Favorite Place


Where you are, therein lies -
My secure, warm and hallowed ground
My favorite place, follows you
My Son

Your scents - part of that place
Baby powder and tearless shampoo
Your sounds - my anchor
Laughter and cries
Calling me

Your joys / mine
Your fears / I will conquer
Your hopes / mine
Your needs / I will meet

My life / yours



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My first entry into a poetry contest.
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breid's avatar
So simple yet so eloquent.

It's utter fantasy, tho - at least in my household. :) (Smile)

My version would need some stanzas like

The soap/in your eyes
My clothes/soaked
Your ducky/In the toilet